The Piccolomini: A Play — Edition Insights
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You did present yourself upon the part Of the emperor to supplicate our duke That he would straight assume the chief command.
QUESTENBURG. To supplicate? Nay, bold general! So far extended neither my commission (At least to my own knowledge) nor my zeal.
ILLO. Well, well, then--to compel him, if you choose, I can remember me right well, Count Tilly Had suffered total rout upon the Lech. Bavaria lay all open to the enemy, Whom there was nothing to delay from pressing Onwards into the very heart of Austria. At that time you and Werdenberg appeared Before our general, storming him with prayers, And menacing the emperor's displeasure, Unless he took compassion on this wretchedness.
ISOLANI (steps up to them). Yes, yes, 'tis comprehensible enough, Wherefore with your commission of to-day, You were not all too willing to remember Your former one.
Why not, Count Isolani? No contradiction sure exists between them. It was the urgent business of that time To snatch Bavaria from her enemy's hand; And my commission of to-day instructs me To free her from her good friends and protectors.
ILLO. A worthy office! After with our blood We have wrested this Bohemia from the Saxon, To be swept out of it is all our thanks, The sole reward of all our hard-won victories.
QUESTENBERG. Unless that wretched land be doomed to suffer Only a change of evils, it must be Freed from the scourge alike of friend or foe.
ILLO. What? 'Twas a favorable year; the boors Can answer fresh demands already.
QUESTENBERG. Nay, If you discourse of herds and meadow-grounds----
ISOLANI. The war maintains the war. Are the boors ruined The emperor gains so many more new soldiers.
QUESTENBERG. And is the poorer by even so many subjects.
ISOLANI. Poh! we are all his subjects.
QUESTENBERG. Yet with a difference, general! The one fill With profitable industry the purse, The others are well skilled to empty it. The sword has made the emperor poor; the plough Must reinvigorate his resources.
ISOLANI. Sure! Times are not yet so bad. Methinks I see [Examining with his eye the dress and ornaments of QUESTENBERG. Good store of gold that still remains uncoined.
QUESTENBERG. Thank Heaven! that means have been found out to hide Some little from the fingers of the Croats.
ILLO. There! The Stawata and the Martinitz, On whom the emperor heaps his gifts and graces, To the heart-burning of all good Bohemians-- Those minions of court favor, those court harpies, Who fatten on the wrecks of citizens Driven from their house and home--who reap no harvests Save in the general calamity-- Who now, with kingly pomp, insult and mock The desolation of their country--these, Let these, and such as these, support the war, The fatal war, which they alone enkindled!
BUTLER. And those state-parasites, who have their feet So constantly beneath the emperor's table, Who cannot let a benefice fall, but they Snap at it with dogs' hunger--they, forsooth, Would pare the soldiers bread and cross his reckoning!
ISOLANI. My life long will it anger me to think, How when I went to court seven years ago, To see about new horses for our regiment, How from one antechamber to another They dragged me on and left me by the hour To kick my heels among a crowd of simpering Feast-fattened slaves, as if I had come thither A mendicant suitor for the crumbs of favor That fell beneath their tables. And, at last, Whom should they send me but a Capuchin! Straight I began to muster up my sins For absolution--but no such luck for me! This was the man, this Capuchin, with whom I was to treat concerning the army horses! And I was forced at last to quit the field, The business unaccomplished. Afterwards The duke procured me in three days what I Could not obtain in thirty at Vienna.
QUESTENBERG. Yes, yes! your travelling bills soon found their way to us! Too well I know we have still accounts to settle.
ILLO. War is violent trade; one cannot always Finish one's work by soft means; every trifle Must not be blackened into sacrilege. If we should wait till you, in solemn council, With due deliberation had selected The smallest out of four-and-twenty evils, I' faith we should wait long-- "Dash! and through with it!" That's the better watchword. Then after come what may come. 'Tis man's nature To make the best of a bad thing once past. A bitter and perplexed "what shall I do?" Is worse to man than worst necessity.
QUESTENBERG. Ay, doubtless, it is true; the duke does spare us The troublesome task of choosing.
BUTLER. Yes, the duke Cares with a father's feelings for his troops; But how the emperor feels for us, we see.
Coleridge's translation of Schiller's The Piccolomini opens with a preface that immediately signals the translator's craft: he chose not to render the prelude Wallenstein's Camp in rhyme, citing the poverty of English rhymes and the incongruity of its lax verses with contemporary taste. This decision shapes the play's tone, grounding it in a more sober, prose-like verse that prioritizes psychological nuance over the original's broad humor. The excerpts show a drama built on charged dialogue, where characters reveal themselves through what they say—and what they leave unsaid.
Translator's Visible Hand
Coleridge's preface is a rare window into the translator's choices. He defends omitting the prelude because its nine-syllable rhyming metre would be 'incompatible with a faithful adherence to the sense' in English. This is not a confession of failure but a deliberate aesthetic decision: he prioritizes semantic fidelity over formal mimicry. The result is a play that reads as a coherent dramatic poem, not a pastiche. Coleridge also notes that the prelude is 'not necessary as a preliminary explanation,' implying that The Piccolomini stands alone. His translation thus reframes Schiller's trilogy for an English audience, stripping away what he saw as extraneous comic relief to focus on the tragic core.
Diction of Restraint and Surge
The dialogue oscillates between formal restraint and sudden emotional outburst. Max Piccolomini speaks of 'the dazzle of the jewels that played round you' hiding 'the beloved from me'—a metaphor that links visual splendor to emotional distance. Thekla counters with a directness that cuts through his abstraction: 'Then you saw me / With your eye only—and not with your heart?' This interplay of polished speech and raw feeling defines the lovers' exchanges. Elsewhere, Max describes the camp as 'a bridge / That, reconducting to my former life, / Divides me and my heaven,' using architectural imagery to express his dislocation. Such diction reveals characters caught between public roles and private selves.
The Weight of Unspoken Words
Silence and interruption drive key moments. In Act III, Scene III, Max recounts his confession to Thekla: 'With instant boldness I caught her in my arms, my lips touched hers; / There was a rustling in the room close by; / It parted us—'Twas you.' The Countess's entrance truncates the scene, leaving the emotional climax offstage. Later, Thekla interrupts the Countess to speak for herself: 'Spare yourself the trouble: / That hears he better from myself.' These structural choices emphasize what is withheld. Characters often speak in asides or broken sentences, as when Max says 'I—I see her suffer, / Yet cannot keep myself from being happy.' The play's tension arises not from action but from the pressure of what cannot be said aloud.
Setting as Psychological Mirror
The camp and castle are not mere backdrops but extensions of character. Thekla finds the 'motley stage of warriors' delightful, binding 'to life, binds to reality, / What hitherto had but been present to me / As a sweet dream.' For her, the military spectacle animates imagination. For Max, the same setting 'forces me down to earth' and 'makes a dream of my reality.' This contrast in perception—one seeing vitality, the other confinement—underscores their divergent paths. The 'mysterious castle' that Thekla mentions as guarding a 'wond' (wonder) hints at hidden knowledge, possibly political intrigue. The physical spaces thus mirror the characters' inner conflicts: openness versus enclosure, freedom versus duty.
Readers approaching The Piccolomini should attend to the rhythm of its verse—Coleridge's blank verse carries the weight of German iambic pentameter while allowing for natural pauses. The play rewards attention to what characters do not say: interruptions, hesitations, and abrupt exits are as telling as speeches. Because the excerpts cover only the middle portion of the trilogy, the full arc of Wallenstein's conspiracy remains incomplete here, but the personal drama of the Piccolomini family stands on its own as a study of loyalty and love under political pressure.
Some evenings, reading Coleridge's Piccolomini, I kept thinking how the same tiredness of masks and duty lingers in a household’s quiet corners. The farce The spoil'd child holds a charm that, though lighter, mirrors that ache. It reminded me how a family’s small rebellions can speak as gently as any war. I found myself smiling at the echoes. The spoil'd child: A farce, in two acts, as performed at the Theatre Royal, Drury Lane — Text and Context felt familiar in a strange way.
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